Today we have been looking at writing an event from a story in detail.  We used a treasure chest to think about what we would do if we came across it.  Here is Max’s outstanding piece of writing…………..

I started creeping into the mysterious cave.   I passed lots of bright yellow and gloomy black police tape, counting about 5 DO NOT ENTER signs!

As I put my first step into the dusty mist, a quick and horrible chill ran down my spine and desperate screams echoed around me.  All of a sudden, a light flickered in the distance.  I stepped back but tripped over a rock.  My leg was badly injured but I was like a moth and a fire; I had to check out that flash…………………..

What a cliff-hanger!